Which poem is better?

which poem is better?

be honest

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by what metric?

which one you like better?

follow your heart

something like "emotional impact" i guess.

but what emotion?
these are two different poems expressing two different ideas in two different ways.

which one moved you more. Your own judgement. If you can only pick one.

Right, although I wonder if a six year old really understands the dramatic effect he created or if it were by accident.
The right one is just the usual poetic romantic drivel

in what way?

fucking dumb robot, just feel something already

oh piss off

i see

i just don't see the point in comparing apples and oranges and going "what one better?"
it's surface level examination at best.

Right. He gives you the tools to make the story your own without writing every detail. Left lost me after "thine eyes". Also the third and fourth lines rhyming is a stretch.

The 6 year oldest is better

What do you think OP? I get that the first is more elaborate but it just doesn't provoke that visceral fear and danger of the predator

Which do you prefer? Apples or oranges?

>left:
>blah blah blah
>let me namedrop my other poem about the lamb as well
>right:
>the unbreakable will of man and beast alike summed up in a few short verses

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no way a 6 year old wrote that

My balls are itchy..

Apples are objectively better. This isn't an academic debate this is Any Forums you pompous fuck.

Ask this on /lit/ user

Apples/Oranges

Fag/got

They both suck

Satan wants you