I would try to do both hands with long finder nails instead of only 1 to better convey feminity. As well as do something different about hat/hair to me the hat with hair feels like a truck driver type thing. I think one or the other could work. Like that with more of a pony tail. Or just that same hair with no hat. But I'm just some random person on the internet with not a big interest in art so don't take this too serious.
Not sure if this is the intention but last character has very long legs porportion wise.
I draw people getting their heads blown off or being riddled with bullet holes. I also draw people getting their faces smashed in with lead pipes or having their throats slit and their heads cut off.
