So, I reworked my OC a bit. Made her legs shorter, made her upper torso a tad bit longer and wider. Also made the boobs fuller and gave her a cleave.
So, for the new anons I'm making a vampire game ala Tomb Raider where your vampire MC tries to find a relic hidden in a dungeon that makes her a vampire queen. I would like some input on gameplay and stuff, like vamprie themed puzzles and traps such as pots filled with salt or holy water or stake traps etc etc.
>those fucking toes
Doing the footfags dirty.
hips and thighs too huge
For the love of god go torrent Anatomy for Sculptors and stop posting here
You cant learn anatomy by looking at porn, trust me you arent the first to try
>t. seamus
wtf is that
Good lord you're right
oh nah
First thing that came to mind
you need some anatomy books as references desu
Thighs aren't long enough. Feet are hideous. You should probably make the hands bigger too.
Mother of FUCKING GOD. SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX
Faggot
here's the best advice you can get from there
don't listen to anyone who's just making a commission
you're not making a game for one person and by trying to please everyone you're pleasing no one
also if you're going to go the "easy gacha route" make the close as skimpy as possible
with that good luck I hope I'll get to masturbate to one of your character some day
Anatomy is all fucked up and not even in a good way. Fix her posture too, lordosis is disgusting.
Replied to the wrong post nigger
disgusting anatomy unless you are making that a futa monster that rapes the heroine.
Sorry I'm still learning. I posted in the other thread about reworking the feet.
I don't care about anatomy. I only care about it being sexually appealing with exaggerated boobies, ass, hips and thighs.
Sorry
Faggot
>I only care about it being sexually appealing with exaggerated boobies, ass, hips and thighs.
So, the anatomy.
>I don't care about anatomy
Coomer monkey brain spotted.
The only thing you'll be appealing to with that monster are monkey-brained niggers. Anatomy aside, the model is super fucked from any angle that isn't straight on, post a direct side view of it.
based.
Pro tip: No one who memes about anatomy knows anything about it themselves
>coomer-tier design
>puzzle and traps focused
Have you played Haydee OP? Your concept reminds me of it.
>Check previous thread for comparison's sake
The torso elongation isn't amazing, but it's acceptable.
I wouldn't even worry about the toes if you plan to put a shoe over it, but I admit good LORD those are horrifying.
The addition of a back view is a good choice to your OP image.
The breast fullness and cleavage is a good choice too.
>gameplay and stuff like vampire themed puzzles
The front door to the tomb/dungeon/whatever is wide open, but you cannot physically enter without "permission." The door itself has an inscription on it that basically says "Only those worthy of her majesty may enter." But it's all scuffed up, so you gotta go find some water and a cleaning rag to wipe it off so you can read it and gain permission to enter.
That's literally OPs model except made by someone who has a basic idea of what the human body looks like. Exaggeration done right.
I made the thighs longer last time and ppl complained. I'll fix feet next.
Thank you user!
Ok is it the thighs? I'm not changing the belly boobs or hips.
Thanks
>i dont care about anatomy
Please use some premade feet assets. I've seen some modeling streams and it seems to be perfectly acceptable to use premade hands and feet to significantly cut down on time. Not even a footfag but those feet are very very distractingly bad
Kinda agree with some of the user's here
Something like this might be good for 2D but probably translate awful for 3D.
Is she going to end up flying instead of jumping due to how chunky she is?
Is her bat form (if she turns into a bat or something) going to be tubby too?
I feel like you are going for a venus body type, which I would say try to look up some 3d models that does it well and maybe implement something like that into yours
Scrap the whole thing, and start from simpler forms, trust me
She's still built like a frog
I've downloaded it.
My model looks this. What is different about the anatomy? I'm ADD someone point it out or draw over my image with red paint please?
So the upper torso should be longer?
>The front door to the tomb/dungeon/whatever is wide open, but you cannot physically enter without "permission." The door itself has an inscription on it that basically says "Only those worthy of her majesty may enter." But it's all scuffed up, so you gotta go find some water and a cleaning rag to wipe it off so you can read it and gain permission to enter.
Ah nice. I got you.
>the upper torso should be longer?
Nah, I was inclined to say shorter, but it does not look too bad as is.
That's why I posted it, although the in-game model is not as curvy
The legs from the knees down still look strange, particularly around the calves, heels, and toes.
I liked the boobs how they were before better
I'm working on the feet, give me time...
>Is she going to end up flying instead of jumping due to how chunky she is?
Yeah a double jump with one wing.
>feel like you are going for a venus body type
Exactly!!!! I used references from /d/. I guess it works well with 2D stuff better....
No.
And that's a good thing.
>That's literally OPs model
>My model looks this
It doesn't, you need to fix the posture on yours. Look at your model from different angles and imagine it in a walk cycle, it will look ridiculous.
Out of curiosity, what kind of head will you be going for? Something conventional, "kinda slutty human head" or something more like a Nosferatu?
based, i think you should make the ass wider (butterfly ass) make the aurolas bigger and the central part of the tummy more prominent
I don't know shit about anatomy, but the shape of the legs and the way they connect to the torso stand out the most to me about your model.
>ignoring the second half of the post
Yeah she does look like she has lordosis. So I have to push her hips forward?
Kinda like drow ranger from Dota or sylvanas or widiwmaker but with red eyes bat ears and elf ears
Aren't vampires supposed to have idealized bodies, or is this some kind of frog-like Nosferatu?
He used "waifu" as a synonym for "sexy girl", huh. Begone, OP, you cultural parasite looking for a quick buck. I will not help you push out your ironic 'Vampire Waifus" garbage
>ignoring the second
What did he mean by this?
It's shit
>4 ears
Now you have my attention.
>not knowing what literally means
jesus christ OP
just stop posting, practice for 3 years minimum, then come back.
why would a vampire be this fucking fat
Redo everything from below the waist. Her thighs ass and legs are garbage tier while everything above is great.
Power-chugged an entire blood bank.
Cholesterol from all the blood kek
because OP likes women
Worked for 2B and she's an android and everyone loves yoko taro for doing that.