Chapter 2 dump
Aliens Area
Daniel Sanchez
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Nolan Baker
Jeremiah Miller
James Edwards
Angel Gutierrez
Aiden Barnes
Not bad. We get to know at least not all aliens came to Earth to fuck shit up. Also I like the detective guy
Ethan Brown
Gavin Foster
Carson Richardson
Joseph Young
Is it me or does this seem like it should have been how chapter one ended?
Anthony Campbell
Bentley Reyes
Justin Bell
Noah Perry
Aaron Green
Yeah, but they might don't want to has 2 actions sequences in one chapter
Jeremiah Rivera
Dominic Ramirez
Thomas Scott
Jordan Martin
Hudson Williams
Leo Gutierrez
Nolan Allen
John Stewart
Colton Smith
Yeah, I'm just not really feeling this one. Something just seems off in terms of pacing. Also I still not like how thr MCs goal is just to "provide for his siblings/help people" its relatable and some what noble one, but not something I feel will make thr story more enjoyable to read.
Jonathan Mitchell
Nathaniel Hall
Carson Sullivan
Caleb King
Hudson Cooper
Done, feel like it's a bit too fast paced. We havent had time to establish the characters and their relationship and jump right into the next action sequence. Hope there will be some breather next chapter
Xavier Campbell
If nothing else, I like the way this sequence is set in scene.
But I don't like this page. The sfx is covering too much, the sequence of panels on the right wasn't really needed to show what was happening, and the actual framing of the shot on the left leaves much to be desired.
James Allen
zannen
Nathan Wood
they're already making googly eyes. but yeah i don't see this one living, sorry