>Bane: So, you came back to die with your city.
>Batman: Can't die twice.
>Bane: Yes, perhaps Bruce Wayne died long ago.
>beat
>Batman: Consider this after life.
>[the two lunge at each other]
There. Was it really that hard to write something even slightly less dull than the original line?
Bane: So, you came back to die with your city
That's somehow even more retarded.
lol ok? its still better than the shit they wrote
dont quit your day job op
I mean, not really.
>Bane: So, you came back to die with your city.
>CIA: No. I came back. For you!
>Bane: So, you came back to die with your city
>Batman: No, I came back for you hot stuff
>*slaps butt*
What do you guys think?
would have been kino if CIA showed up in the end to defeat bane
>Bane: So, you came back to die with your city.
>Batman: Consider this after life.
fixed
the movie sucks. you can't fix it in any possible way. also your dialogue is cheesy as fuck
>Bane: so, you came back to die with your city
>Batman: no I had to pick some medications up from the pharmacy
fuck i mean to write "consider this the after life"
i forgot the the
>>For you!
Fuck off Stuckmann
This could work
>Bane: So, you came back to die with your city.
>Bamtan: Our city
Batman not replying and just an angry Close up or something would've been better. Nolan is such a fucking hack.
You did terrible man that whole thing reads like a kid smashing two action figures together
kino
>No, I had to return some video tapes. Hey Paul! AAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHH!
>Bane: so, you came back to die with your city
>Batman: fuck you faggot
Thoughts?
Good job, you actually made it worse.
>Bane: So, you came back to die with your city
>Batman: no, I came all over Talia al ghul's face
Based
It's not lol don't quit that day job just yet op lmao
>Bane: Soooo, you came back to die with your city ?
>Bats: No. I came to save my city.
bretty gud
>>beat
I keked
The idea of batman needing a second to come up with a witty retort in the midst of this brawl is golden