I've been working on my first comic: Sniper Coil. It's the story of a retired engineer, combat veteran, and a man of many talents who spends his golden years performing "odd" jobs. I'm going to do a "storytime" in this thread and share the first issue. All feedback, criticism, and comments are welcome.
You’re narrative is simple, but it’s holding together. That’s important. I think the decision to focus on one character was wise. I’d say there are too many tight shots, your characters don’t look integrated with their environments and your work lacks polish. Keep it up.
Grayson Flores
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Thank you, I appreciate the feedback. I'm working on my art skills every day and always trying to improve. I think learning to draw (well) is a life-long venture and (coming from doing primarily traditional art,) it seems as if digital art offers a whole new world of tools to utilize when drawing.
