Songwriting Thread

What are you working on? Post songs, works in progress, lyrics etc. Comment on others.

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The last song I wrote. Thinking about including it on my next album.

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Do you like Johnny Cash?

Yes, very much so.

I changed it from you V I IV to a ii V I
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Ok now it's a vi V I how the shit do you people pick one progression
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Shitty audio but does this chord progression obviously rip anyone off?

No idea, but chord progressions aren't protected by copyright so who gives a shit?

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Speaking of ripping people off, I completely ripped off Desolation Row for the vocal melody of this song. Should I go ahead and release it when fewer than a thousand people will hear my music? What's the worst that could happen?

Brother you are playing the same chords A# F# G#
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bump

>tfw these threads die so fast

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some ideas i’ve been playing with. the first 2 are quite similar i’m not sure which i like better

>how the shit do you people pick one progression
>he hasn't discovered a revolving/morphing progression for chorus II and verses 3 and 4

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this is the best progression of the versions posted, good shit

Very important work here
For the milfs
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Why are vocal melodies so hard, bros?
I can write decent enough instrumental passages but when I try to set words to it it all falls apart. When I use lyrics I've written beforehand they mess up the rhythmic pattern of the melody and when I try to work the other way and write lyrics off the melody it comes off as forced and staid.

I'm featuring on a friend's track, tell me what you think of what I have so far

Yo my name's Curse
Finally on the verse
I really hate to say it but my nana's doing worse
Her heart arrhythmia
Is now a regularity
Her funny bone is broken and I don't see the hilarity
Her low O2 has now further decreased
She's grasping at the empty air and asking for a priest
So please send love, cuz I've got someone to bury
This hospital is stinky and mortality is scary

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does the piano fit in at the end of this intro?

Yes, but it could be a bit more complex melodically